Darkness
Falls
Across
My
Room.
The
Light
Bulb
Burns
Brightly
In
My
Sister's
While
Trying
To
Sleep
You
Decide
Which
Is
Better
Light
Or
Dark
Light
Or
Dark
My
Eyes
Adjust
To
The
Light
Which
Causes
Light
And
Dark
Could
There
Be
Light
And
Dark
Or
Just
Light
Or
Dark
Is
There
A
Difference?
Light
And
Dark
Or
Light
Or
Dark
You Decide.
I like the way you wrote it, I was reading it out loud and it was funny to listen to me say it. Nice job Nate
ReplyDeleteI like how its written also because you use simple words, but how they are strung together is complex and interesting to read.
ReplyDeleteI like how you write it, very unique.
ReplyDeleteI mean wrote it.
DeleteLove the single word lines to accentuate the simple words and potentially deeper meaning. I think it's both.
ReplyDeleteHow interesting, I really enjoyed your poem, and the way the words connected.
ReplyDeleteVery nice slice, Nate. Unique and interesting.
ReplyDeleteNice and original slice!
ReplyDeleteWell done, Nate! I love the structure and the patter of it. I'd love to hear this read out loud.
ReplyDeleteI really like this. It gets me thinking.
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